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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 20 November 2012

MY film review

Tamaki college I thought your movie was funny .
My favourite part was the 50 plus danclng.
 The men could dance good.I  think people should go and see it
because it is so funny.

I give  you 6 gold stars out of 10.

Friday, 19 October 2012

Halloween


It was halloween and two brother were fighting over the bucket of lollies give it back said the clown angrily Don't take my lollies moaned ninja as he pulled the bucket strongly Next thing mum came in gave them a growling and sent both to their room maybe mum ate the lollies.

Monday, 15 October 2012

something to play with

Room thirteen just discover what they find out

Wednesday, 30 May 2012

The Tiger and the Deer

 
One day there was a tiger he was chasing the deer.
The deer ran  away from the tiger because it was afraid of it The deer went to be safe with the other deers.